π£οΈ English and Language Usage Β· Knowledge of Language Β· Lesson 4 of 6 Β· 6 min
Misplaced and dangling modifiers, and parallel lists
π "Walking to the clinic, the rain soaked my scrubs." Was the rain walking? Modifier errors create pictures you never meant.
π‘ Key idea
Put modifiers beside what they describe, and give every item in a list the same form.
π§ The idea
A MODIFIER is a word or phrase that describes something, and it should sit next to the word it describes. A MISPLACED MODIFIER is in the wrong spot: "She almost studied for six hours" means she never started; "She studied for almost six hours" is what was meant. A DANGLING MODIFIER has nothing in the sentence to describe. An opening phrase such as "Walking to the clinic" must be followed by the person doing the walking: "Walking to the clinic, I got soaked by the rain." PARALLEL STRUCTURE means items in a list or comparison share the same grammatical form: "reading, writing and calculating," not "reading, writing and to calculate." Pairs joined by both/and, either/or, not only/but also must also match: "not only fast but also accurate." When you check a list, line the items up and make sure each one could follow the same opening words.
βοΈ Worked example
"After reviewing the chart, the medication was given by the nurse." Step 1: who reviewed the chart? The nurse. Step 2: the word right after the comma is medication, so the phrase dangles. Step 3: put the doer first: "After reviewing the chart, the nurse gave the medication." Now the opening phrase describes the nurse, and the active verb is clearer too.
π Takeaways
- An opening -ing or -ed phrase must be followed by the one doing it.
- Place limiting words (only, almost, just, nearly) right before what they limit.
- List items match: all -ing, all to + verb, or all nouns.
π Terms in this lesson
Parallel structure: Using the same grammatical form for items in a list or pair; for example, "reading, writing and studying" (not "reading, writing and to study").
β Check yourself
Question 1 of 3
Which sentence avoids a dangling modifier?
- Rushing to class, my coffee spilled on the stairs.
- Rushing to class, I spilled my coffee on the stairs.
- Rushing to class, the stairs were covered in my coffee.
- Rushing to class, coffee was spilled on the stairs by me.
Show the answer and rationale
Answer: B
The opening phrase describes the person rushing, and only the second sentence places I right after it. The others make the coffee, the stairs, or the coffee again appear to be rushing.
Question 2 of 3
Which sentence has parallel structure?
- The program teaches students assessment, to plan and evaluating care.
- The program teaches students to assess, plan and evaluate care.
- The program teaches students assessing, planning and to evaluate care.
- The program teaches students to assess, to plan and evaluating care.
Show the answer and rationale
Answer: B
To assess, plan and evaluate share one to + verb form. The other options mix infinitives, -ing words and nouns in the same list.
Question 3 of 3
Where should only go to say that Ben missed one question and no more? "Ben missed one question on the quiz."
- Ben missed one question on the only quiz.
- Ben missed only one question on the quiz.
- Only Ben missed one question on the quiz.
- Ben missed one only question on the quiz.
Show the answer and rationale
Answer: B
Only should sit right before what it limits, the number of questions: "missed only one question." Placed before Ben it says no one else missed one, "one only question" is not standard word order, and "the only quiz" changes the meaning entirely.
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